• OhmsLawn@lemmy.world
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    5 months ago

    It is an odd tone. So much “I learned” and “I found out.” It comes off as a youthful essay.

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      5 months ago

      Good point. It’s not news that “you learned” something. What is your conclusion?. What is your reasoning? If it’s been said before, we can just read that.